tirsdag den 10. maj 2011
Uddrag
"When Lydia was little, she easily came to crying. Clara always told her she was weak. That she needed to stop crying. When Lydia started crying even more and Kassander found her alone on the stairs, Lydia told him the story. He said to her; ”I always liked your tears, Lyddi, they reminds me of butterflies” he catched one of her tears falling down her cheek. ”Pretty tears in your eyes, running down, turning into beautiful butterflies”, Lydia laughed at this, and he sent her a blinding smile. Since then, he had been singing this to her everytime he saw her cry. It reminded her of how much she loved him, and how much he loved her."
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Flot skrevet. Starten giver bare ikke rigtigt nogen mening. Fortælleren fortæller at lydia tit græd da hun var mindre. Så kommer Clara ind i billedet, og pludselig er cassandra der også. Det mærkeligste kommer dog, da der står "når Cassandra fandt hende alene på trappen, fortalte Lydia HAM historien. Og så er der pludselig en dreng med i billedet. Det forvirrer bare læseren.
Det også et "uddrag", man mangler altså noget information, som man får før. Kassandra er en dreng, og "ham" som hun fortæller det til ;)
Men virkelig, 1000 1000 tak for din kommentar og holdning! Det virkelig dejligt at få :D
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